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Dilemma by ~duckie2318:iconduckie2318:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Open




~March 12 2002~

She
        l
          o
             v
                e
                   s        not
                       him
                             e          DilemmA
                                                    
                                                    L
           
                                                    L    
                                                        I want
                                                                  is    her
                                 Dilemma

                   trouble

                                              Problem
                                              A
                                              I
                                              Never have I
                                              felt this way
                                                          h
                                                          a
                                                          t
                                                               do I do?

                                  Dilemma

Leave her be?

     OR

Try to get her back?

I cannot bear ths any longer

                                 Dilemma

I'll get her back!

              somehow
              someway
                          e
                          t
                                    it hurts
                                             to see her with
                                                       him
                    n o t  m e
                                 x
                                 c
                                 r
                                 u
                                 i
                                agony
                                 t
                                 i
                                 n
                                 g
             All I can do is wait
                         take time to deal with my

                                      Dilemma

          The hours         d            r         a            g        by
                            

                              I wait
                                         for her to come back
                                         for an answer to my

                                        Dilemma

                                  
©2005-2009 ~duckie2318
:iconduckie2318:

Author's Comments

This is a very old poem. Written March 12 2002. I was a senior in high school. I remember that I read some poetry from E.E Cummings..and he taught me through his creative words that poems don't have to be written in sentence form. Words can be expressed however you feel like.

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~tears-of-sanctity Jul 15, 2005, 9:09:15 PM
I love this, I can totally relate to what you are saying...keep up the great work!

--
Promises are lies with pretty ribbon..
:iconmeow360:
~Meow360 Jul 16, 2005, 3:39:35 AM
EE Cummings ei? Great! totally cool! i got a bit dizzy lookin around but then i got everythin... very very wicked! esp da word "d r a g"

Rock on Gal!! :D

--
The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its own reason for existing.
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~duckie2318 Jul 16, 2005, 6:21:05 PM
dizzy huh..lay off the catnip :weed: meowies lol... Thanks again for commenting. I always look for them :!:
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~duckie2318 Jul 16, 2005, 6:22:22 PM
Thank u so much. I :heart: it when u comment:hug:
:icontears-of-sanctity:
~tears-of-sanctity Jul 16, 2005, 6:41:56 PM
No problem, your writing is so great.....I can't help but comment!

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Promises are lies with pretty ribbon..
:iconhermit15:
~hermit15 Jul 16, 2005, 7:28:34 PM
It's like a puzzle! Beautiful
:iconduckie2318:
~duckie2318 Jul 16, 2005, 7:31:02 PM
Thanks. It's good to try to do something different.
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~alegalalien2005 Jul 16, 2005, 8:16:02 PM
I love just the way you write, Its an art within itself! The words themselves are very deep( ouch):worship: I am neever NEVER dissappointed when I click on your work!!!!! Thanks for sharing your stuff w/ me and all of us at DA:hug:

--
Feed the need, its not greed, I figure so what, Can you fix the hole that resides deep in this GUT, Ill fix myself whatever it takes---I CANNOT WAIT!---SNOT "get some"
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~loved-inspiration Jul 17, 2005, 12:45:11 AM
awesome writing..i love the way you space your writing too..unlike anyother poem that i have ever saw..cept for all of your..its amazing..keep it up..

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the element of surprise would be lost.
the feeling of being anxious would skyrocket.
and hate would practically be evaded.
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