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June 12 2006

Starting at my weak, pathetic appearance
In a cracked mirror
Crouched
Beneath the bathroom sink

Flowing water
Disguised my cries
My tears escape
But unsurprisingly that
A part of me
    Wants to run away
From myself

Lifting my scabbed sleeves
I bring forth to my flesh
Creating a masterpiece
I drag it
Back
               And   
                                 Forth
Creating my own brilliant art
It’s pulsating vibrancy
Lures me to rupture
Its rhythmic beat
Creating a musical symphony
         Of cries and blood
I orchestrate my veins
To release a genius chorus of mirth
Velvet liquid seeps
S     l       o        w       l      y

A smile widens
Upon my face
The beautiful music
The well planned notes
All my emotions
Melt upon the blade
                 My instrument
My euphony
Of evaporating pain
     tempo of broken pulses
The melancholic yet fulfilling music that seep out my severed chords
            My beautiful music
©2006-2009 ~duckie2318
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~June 12 2006~

~Gary Jules--Mad World~

Hide my head I wanna drown my sorrow
No tomorrow
No tomorrow
And I find I kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
The dreams in which I’m dying are the best I’ve ever had

Pic is from my brother's friend Enigmius check out his gallery!

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o_O

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:iconapocalypse-please17:
this made me cringe . but like i've said earlier, i guess its achieved what its meant to .. powerful poem , scary but ><

that slowly part really makes me feel squishy for some reason LOL

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:iconduckie2318:
Did it make u feel squishy like a vagina?
I am glad u like it and cringed. :D
:iconapocalypse-please17:
:sheepish:

i like sheep.

LOL that was so random :p

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:iconneothropic:
That was really creepy. But also strangely stimulating. Makes me want to go out and slice my own wrists to see if I can hear some music, too.
:iconaudrey-tifa:
Hell, that's awesome! You're better than I am in this. o.o

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:iconcoasegrindingpowder:
cringe

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They are often above the city,
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:iconmeow360:
umm... this is creepy... spine-chilling! i haven't kept up with ur work much but it's still creepy and goddamnit good!! :D

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:iconstromstrider:
Wow... ok.. now that was heavy!
I'm a little scard of myself because I didn't cring on that one... I've done a lot of research of suicide and self mutilation this year, so maybe I'm used to it I guess... That's kinda wierd...

Anyway, yet another very powerful poem.. Very strong images, and I loved the word choise! Another great one!

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"There are good people, and bad people. Good people do good things, bad people do bad things. When good people do bad things, it's called religion."
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