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February 17 2007

He bled his feelings in D Minor
crooning of a girl
I do not know

He strums his maghony wooden acoustic
with his callused fingertips
singing in ethereal melodies of lost love
that he once adored
whether the passion still lingers
I do not know

His voice lifts me away
I gaze at him
in yearning amazement
his chorus of love
strings plucked with passion
Each fret bearing a powerful feeling of affection


Transfusing his emotions
in D Minor
serenading of a girl
I do not know

In fascination
longing to one day
to musically inspire him
in a melodic song of requited love
©2007-2009 ~duckie2318
:iconduckie2318:

Author's Comments

I know this is beyond my normal type of work that I create. This is the cause of my my lover, Chris Carrabba! lol

I was inspired to write this while listening to Dashboard Confessional.

My series...yes I am going to finish Deadly 7 one day..lol

and when I do it will fuck your mind.

So stay tune kids!

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:iconrodentfanatic:
Mmmmm, mind-fuck....
:iconcoldenergie:
Insane(:very nice(;

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Cage of ice and darkness...[link]

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*3D-Asuarus
:iconduckie2318:
Thanks not my normal piece..glad u liked it!
:iconneothropic:
You are smooth with the metaphor, darling.

This is beautiful.
:iconloved-inspiration:
even tho its not normally "you", its still a great piece. nice job.

and im gonna def. stay tune.

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the element of surprise would be lost.
the feeling of being anxious would skyrocket.
and hate would practically be evaded.
:iconcoldenergie:
:)

--
Cage of ice and darkness...[link]

member of...
~3dAC
*3D-Asuarus
:iconautumwitchcharmed7:
yea im a dashboard fan so right on lyrics for chris. i love his word play in songs!! i like how you feed off his engery!!

--
Autumn Wilson
They say im the dark angel.
That I swallow too many pills.
But I say it isn't enough
Got any more?
:blackrose:

If you aint got 10,000 days you don't know what your missing.
" you must have been high"- The pot

Artist TOOOOOOL
:iconduckie2318:
yeah..I am into them more now lately..I do love his word play in his songs...its such a great band with great lyrics..thanks for the comment

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